Month: December 2024

Law of the Broken Earth – The Griffin Mage #3 by Rachel Neumeier

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Title: Law of the Broken Earth

Author: Rachel Neumeier

Series: The Griffin Mage

Sexual Content: none

Objectional Content: Mild violence

Synopsis: (from Goodreads) : In Feierabiand, in the wide green Delta, far from the burning heat of the griffin’s desert, Mienthe’s peaceful life has been shaken. Tan — clever, cynical, and an experienced spy — has brought a deadly secret out of the neighboring country of Linularinum. Now, as three countries and two species rush toward destruction, Mienthe fears that even her powerful cousin Bertaud may be neither able nor even willing to find a safe path between the secret Linularinum would kill to preserve and the desperate ferocity of the griffins. But can Mienthe? And, in the end, will Tan help her . . . or do everything in his power to stand in her way?

My Review

It has been approximately half an hour since I finished reading Law of the Broken Earth as I begin to write this review and honestly? I’m not entirely sure what to say. This book begins by introducing whole new characters. There’s nothing wrong with that, I like both of the characters and they play an integral part in the plot of this book.

The Great Wall created in the previous book is cracked and on the verge of breaking completely. The griffins want the wall to come down so they can invade the country of earth and destroy it. Naturally, the inhabitants of the countries of earth don’t want this to happen. Events are set in motion to prevent this from happening and find a resolution once and for all.

My dislikes about this book are pretty much the same as the previous books. There aren’t enough griffins in a trilogy called “the Griffin Mage”, the names of places and some people are impossible to pronounce and the plot moves along slowly til near the end when everything seems to happen all at once.

I like the character, Mienthe, even if I have no idea how to say her name properly. She was interesting to follow as she discovers her own unique gift and is instrumental in bringing everything to a satisfactory close. I liked that characters from the previous books returned and had roles to play, however small.

The ending did bring the overall conflict of the trilogy to a close, though it just wasn’t what I was expecting or really wanting out of the books. I won’t say that they were bad, as they weren’t, they just weren’t as good as I thought they could be.

My rating for Law of the Broken Earth is 3 out of 5 stars.

Thanks for reading even though this review is sort of all over the place.

Land of the Burning Sands – The Griffin Mage #2 by Rachel Neumeier

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Title: Land of the Burning Sands

Author: Rachel Neumeier

Series: The Griffin Mage

Sexual Content: none

Objectional Content: Violence, slavery

Synopsis: (from Goodreads) Gereint Enseichen of Casmantium knows little and cares less about the recent war in which his king tried to use griffins and fire to wrest territory from the neighboring country of Feierabiand. . .but he knows that his kingdom’s unexpected defeat offers him a chance to escape from his own servitude.

But now that the griffins find themselves in a position of strength, they are not inclined to forgive and the entire kingdom finds itself in deadly peril. Willing or not, Gereint will find himself caught up in a desperate struggle between the griffins and the last remaining Casmantian mage. Even the strongest gifts of making and building may not prove sufficient when the fiery wind of the griffins begins to bury the life of Casmantium beneath the burning sands . . .

My Review

As the second book in a trilogy, I expected Land of the Burning Sand to pick up where the first book left off and follow at least some of the same characters. Instead we are introduced to all new characters in the country of Casmantium. The book opens with the main character of this novel, Gareient, hiding in the cellar of the house where he is held as a slave while a sandstorm turns the city into a desert.

The Land of the Burning Sand mostly follows Gareient as he journey’s out of the desert and attempts to avoid being sold back into slavery. Griffins, are barely even mentioned and only seen from a distance for the most part. It isn’t until much later, probably half way through, that a familiar character makes an appearance. Griffins themselves don’t actually appear until near the end of the book, and then only in a brief scene.

For a trilogy called The Griffin Mage, I would expect more griffins, or at least the actual griffin mage to be more present.

There’s nothing wrong with shifting the perspective of a story to the “other side” as it were, to give a different POV but I found it somewhat annoying when I was expecting more, you know, griffins. The ridiculously long and impossible to pronounce names continue on in this book, adding in much more, until I stopped trying to sound them out and just sort of made a noise in my head while reading those words.

I wanted more of Bertaud, Kes and Karaithin, who the first novel focused on. I was expecting this book to follow Kes as she continued to live with the griffins and how her life would be. Instead, the brief glimpse we get of her is just kind of a tease.

Don’t get me wrong, I did like the book. The characters are interesting and their story is fun to follow, it just wasn’t what I was expecting. I wanted more griffins. I did particularly like the character, Tehre. She is smart and practical, though she very easily gets lost in her own mind. She was fun to read about.

My rating for the Land of the Burning Sand is 3 out of 5 stars.

Lord of the Changing Winds – The Griffin Mage #1 by Rachel Neumeier

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Lord of the Changing Winds, book one of the Griffin Mage trilogy by Rachel Neumeier

Title: Lord of the Changing Winds

Author: Rachel Neumeier

Series: The Griffin Mage

Sexual Content: none

Objectional Content: Violence

Synopsis (from Goodreads): Little ever happens in the quiet villages of peaceful Feierabiand. The course of Kes’ life seems set: she’ll grow up to be an herb-woman and healer for the village of Minas Ford, never quite fitting in but always more or less accepted. And she’s content with that path — or she thinks she is. Until the day the griffins come down from the mountains, bringing with them the fiery wind of their desert and a desperate need for a healer. But what the griffins need is a healer who is not quite human . . . or a healer who can be made into something not quite human.

My Review

I’m going to start this review a little differently than normal and begin with what I didn’t like about this book. There are a lot of names featured in this novel that are somewhat long and difficult to pronounce. The author clearly put in a lot of effort and creativity in these names, however, having to stop and try to sound out these words is really disruptive to the flow of reading. I also found it difficult to remember who the characters were since I couldn’t pronounce their names. This book would have benefited from a pronunciation guide and even a list of characters. Fortunately, the main characters names were not as difficult to pronounce.

Setting that aside, this book is a satisfactory fantasy novel. I haven’t read a lot of books featuring griffins so I found this to be fresh. Kes, the main character, is a quiet girl who has never really fit in with the people in her village and finds acceptance among the griffins. Except for the griffin part, I think this is something a lot of teens can relate to.

I found the writing to be quite beautiful, especially the descriptions of the griffins and the desert. The plot isn’t anything to rave about, but the world itself is interesting. Although this isn’t the most amazing fantasy novel I’ve ever read, I did find it easy to read and interesting enough that I wasn’t bored. It’s a fun quick read and I look forward to starting the next book.

My rating for The Lord of the Changing Wind is 3 out of 5 stars and I’d recommend it to someone looks for a light fantasy.

Thanks for reading!